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my Acrostic poems

Love
Every Animal small and
Meduim
Young or old

I lay in my nice, warm bed .When I felt something it was hard, small, cold and everything but smooth. I didn’t know what it was I couldn’t see anything. But it smelt well like nothing .I had no idea what it was. Guess what it was?


By Stephanie





Ashley was dancing on the beach with her animal friends Ellie the elephant and Millie the monkey .She was the only person on the island because someone had kidnapped her when she was 2. She really wanted to find out who did it. So her Millie and Ellie stared on an adventure they ran to the edge forest .After walking 2 hours they lay down and went to sleep . In the morning Ashley sat up and released Millie was gone Ashley woke up Ellie up then they went to find Millie.

There was a volcano on the island but it hadn’t erupted in 16 years so they went towards it, it was huge they started walking up it when they reached the top they looked inside it. They saw Millie in a cage and a man beside her. Ashley whispered ‘that must be the man who kidnapped me and now Millie, we have to steal Millie .So they climbed down and tried to push a rock when they moved it, it revealed a hidden path they sneaked in fortunately the man was asleep they stole Millie back because the cage wasn’t even locked so they ran out of the forest before Millie woke up when she did s

Ashley was dancing on the beach with her animal friends Ellie the elephant and Millie the monkey .She was the only person on the island because someone had kidnapped her when she was 2. She really wanted to find out who did it. So her Millie and Ellie stared on an adventure they ran to the edge forest .After walking 2 hours they lay down and went to sleep . In the morning Ashley sat up and released Millie was gone Ashley woke up Ellie up then they went to find Millie. he wanted to know what happened they just said she had a bad dream.




Week 6 writing focus; using action words (verbs)
The day was over. I loved climbing the tree but not so much falling out .Swimming in the lake and watching the fish. But most of all I loved playing paint ball it included crawling, shooting, the smell of fresh and lots of bruises.